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Monday 11 May 2020

Lara's Lion

Lara has written a wonderful descriptive story about one of her toys, her special lion.



3 comments:

  1. Hi Lara, I really like how you have added describing words to tell us about how your lion looks and that he is cuddly. He certainly does look cute is this cuddly photo of you and him! Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful work.

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  2. This is an amazing piece of writing Lara. I loved your description of the lion and well done remembering to use finger spacing too. I would agree that he is cute and cuddly. I was wondering what his name is and why he has a green tag.

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  3. Your letter forming is getting a lot better Lara he looks like a nice toy to cuddle.

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